hey good track betty boop! haha like a lot of people the ideas are there.. i think it needs a little work though. for one you need fix your synth pattern. its a little too muddy. in fact most everything is a little too muddy. try turning down your bass or eqing all your highs into your lows. very simple, anthem like, straightforward (late) 90's trance composition.
keep it up!

d(-_-)b

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