downloadin now my friend ooooh progressive... cant wait!

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love the beat and the percs. specially the bongo. ooh and that nice kick! - much better now your kicks are good!

synth @
29 secs is nice but add loads of reverb to the already delayed sound.. you know, like a large room echo. also turn it down in the mix by quite a bit. also bring it in later on in the track and bring the pads that follow it in at the point the synths come in.

those pads are nice, really haunting. up the volume on that and add some delay. i def think they should come in on their own before that synth comes in.

plucked guitary sound is nice but go for a quick attack and release sine wave instead! with some big delay on it.

break overal is nice but getts a bit too busy and loud for the vibe you have started. try lowering some of the volumes or maybe remove some of the parts?

main section. is again a bit loud for me. its the synth that first appears at 3;33. it just ruins it

i think go subtle with this one. you have hit on a really nice vibe. try and tone down the complexity and instead work with a more limited number of tracks of melody.

this sounds like a grilling but i honestly really like this and its so much nicer than your previous work.. you just get better and better.

i can just hear loads of potential for a minimal chill in this tune.

keep playing with this one until you have it just right cos its a nice job.

rich

oh and ps. BUMP!

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hehe nice to hear all that adviceill really take that in my work~!! Ive been turning knobs and eqing for days on that kick it seems
I kinda liked the synth around 3:33.. the ones you hear before are the filtered ones.. im really glad you liked the tune and im rally happy you think im getting better thanks rich! *BUMP*

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come on .. nobody else?

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Hey mate,

Repeating what the other guy said really but that is a really nice kick you have there, maybe a tiny tiny touch more punch on would is need in my opinion. Reverb I also believe is needed on that early synth to add a bit of extra warmth to the track.

This one builds beautifully and I really think this is more your style than any other styles you've tried out. Would love to hear more of this kinda stuff from you, suits you more in my opinion.

You've created a good atmosphere here with this one and that synth in the later part of the track is rather awesome, what did you use for that or any techniques? Anything in particular? Always heard that kind of synth but don't know how to produce one.

Overall, a very good track indeed, would be great if you could try some more in this style. Keep it up, you really are improving as time goes by.

You have your own style,I like that...dark style,you need a PAD-saw'ish pad!

everything said before is true...
keep goin!

9/10

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wowo seems that my whining did help hehe

balti, glad you liked the track, dont know for sure what synth your talking about..:0 if youre more precise ill tell you how to make that synth . happy to hear you think im making progress!
-linkmage yea love the darkstyle ! I think ill throw that pad in, good idea
-kelly lekker wief zoe lestig is dat toch neet hè mjèh post dun track mèr binnekort heijzoe daan zalste gèt mie meiningen huure suc6 met fruity !

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its pretty smooth, but I think overall too repetitive. no new elements that would help the track not get boring after 3min. dont get me wrong, i think it has potential, but in the state its in now, just seems a bit draged out and stuff. good luck with finnishing it- sound levels seem fine and overall eq is good so my advice is to just worry about the compositional aspects,

thanks for sharing.

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Originally posted by Takkra balti, glad you liked the track, dont know for sure what synth your talking about..:0 if youre more precise ill tell you how to make that synth . happy to hear you think im making progress!

The synth at around 3:35 is where it begins, its an awesome synth, really adds extra to the track. Not sure if its fx or the snyth itself but would love to find out.

I made that synth with the vanguard plugin..you select on sawtooth and one bisaw (can have a slightly different name though) and you turn down the "fatness" to almost 0.. leave it at 10% or something.. play with the release and sustain too
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yea im defo going to add more elements this was just an 'idea' sketch, I appreciate the listen !

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