hey im back whit a new tune , here is a cut from my latest Vocal tune.Im very intrested in your opinions

dont be shy its only 400 kb dl =)

Its up for 7 days then gone
this is the url
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...B8305L5PDK5XVYV


Yours Mai Van Dzai

Edit :

http://s18.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...NO0IAEEVGFT8IT7
Longer version

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Last edited by mavve on Dec-15-2005 at 02:06

Hard to say anything about the tune with such a short sample. Much reverb on the vocals, could use some eq'ing I think. And wheres the treble?

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Originally posted by Arctic Breeze Hard to say anything about the tune with such a short sample. Much reverb on the vocals, could use some eq'ing I think. And wheres the treble?

well its very unmastered and umixed and a .wma file =) but your right ill uppload the longer version , (as far as i have made it)

http://s18.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...NO0IAEEVGFT8IT7
here is the longer version 2.min

Some vocals are wrong

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this is actually good. has bags of potential. a finished version of this would sound good. although i must say the vocal makes it. who did by the way?

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Originally posted by dj_kane this is actually good. has bags of potential. a finished version of this would sound good. although i must say the vocal makes it. who did by the way?

Well thank you the lyrics and vocal melody was writen by me
and a vocalist i know joined me in the studio to record it,
so you dont think a dub version of the tune would make it?

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no a dub version would be too plain. the vocals carry the track. altough a remixed version could be good without the vocal but with more layers.

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Originally posted by dj_kane this is actually good. has bags of potential. a finished version of this would sound good. although i must say the vocal makes it. who did by the way?

1+
Hope u can post the full version .
So far sounds interesting, but I concur about the reverb and that is too short .
Keep it up mate .
Kopi =o.

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nice sound, i like vocal trance, good job but i'd like to here the full version some though.

tnx i will post the full lenght version when done. the reverb on the vocals? or on melody?

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