it's got alot of potential, but it sounds too unprofessional... try to get better sounding samples, especially in the middle to end of the song. but i think with tweeking, it could be real nice.

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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

- listening


Call that a bassline? It can go like 2 octaves lower! To me that's the biggest problem in you song. If you want it to stay that high, at least let a loooow sine play the bassline along, that way you don't really change the sound, but it gives more bass to your bassline.
The synth kicking in at about 2 mins is too clean and thin....detune! That goes for more synths I hear....
Pads are cool