well i do like your intro with the synth being all over i do not like the fade in the middle of the tune even if its new to me, it disturbs the song? maybe let those clock's from the intro or whatever they are hang in the air after the fade along with the strings while everything else is faded away, that will make the track to not loose its "energy". the kick is rather weak though and the perc's are inaudible? keep working i feel potential, maybe try tho bring more oomph to the lead and bassline? great track mate

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Thanks Dj Cola for the reply!

I increased the volume of the percs. It was realy too weak.
But imo the kick is not weak.
Let me see what the others think.

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I worked on several things in the track.

I think it sounds better now.

And I hope somebody will discover this topic and leave a little reply

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listening....

sounds nice dude.
bassline is good though you should add more low end. maybe is a but to stereo to, too much efects?
melody/sines is nice stuff.
needs work on the eq, but since this is only a sample you'll probably work on that later.

nice work, could turn out too be somethin' really good.

keep it up.

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This bell synth at the beginning of the sample could do with some wild panning. Make it jump around the stereo field. That'd be cool.

You bass sounds kinda muddy what with that low end pad. Dunno if that's what you want.

Very mint sounds here. All of them are very sharp and distinct. I like it a lot.

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Thanks for the replies.

djsphere: This is Eq-ed. But I think all the instruments are audiable.

thoughtlessjex: thank you for the tip of panning.
I like the bass on this way

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quote:

Originally posted by Energy 87 Thanks for the replies. djsphere: This is Eq-ed. But I think all the instruments are audiable.

must be my headphones

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