Hi all!
this is a tune im working on and i feel a need for some feedback so i know what to do with it .

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BPM: 140
Time: Around 02:00 min
Synth: Pro-53

the name is temporary i think, i have kind of bad imagination in name giving

kplzthnxbbq

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

very raw but i like your ideas.

that synth is so typical but works really well! especially when the kick comes back. really techy and driving. id be dancin to this one.

im not sure if you need some reverb on that synth? maybe a little but then you loose the rawness which i think playes a good role in the track. play around with arrangement and get rid of the tribal percs. use something more techy or maybe use an effect on a techy sound to mimic the vibe the tribal percs produce.

keep it up

rich

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Ok! ill rearrange the drums, they were just an idea!

it is meant to be raw and that "synth" is actually a 3xOsc.

i have some kind of "pluck" melody that im going to make it come in later but i dont know if it will fit. thanks for your rewiev mate.

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i love anuses
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listenning...
percussion seems ok
yeah, that synth is preaty raw, though could sound good if compressed and eq-ed carfully. add some reverb too.
note changes aren't that good, but decent.
work some more on it.

cheers

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i want to get this tune perfect so

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

carzy track I like how you used loop from sliced loops in fly,I also like your bass variation lik in Tiesto traffic...but harmony is really nice ...try to FX your sliced loop... try to clone sliced loop chanel,then send to empty FX channel,then load filter,and then try to automate knobs... that would be great for this track...I think at the same way you can try to automate this bass/melody ..and I think at 1:02 need some atmosphere,also at the begining put some FX(thats only my suggestions)..you are improving...keep going

well thank you, this is only a base, i have a short short sample of how i thought the melody to be somewhere but i cannot post samples under 2 minutes or something right?

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

no,you aren't..You can share with us 20 minutes track,or Dj set,but in next forum

_ I like this smiley

here is an updated version, i gave the perc's individual fx's and the bassline has some more reverb and the tune is structured in a little other way.

Click for V.2

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
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It does to linkmage!

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good

I think bass a bit to loud... nice drums variation... but i thinks intro is too spacey,and now your bass has too much reverb ...maybe you will do pad or strings... somthing need for this track...