I bring myself to put one of my first productions to
your attention
I present light relaxing breaks remix onto track of russian
project Filatov & Soloviev (ex. Soundfiction) "My Tears".
Sound Fiction - My Tears (Paul Vinitsky Breaks Remix)
well nice breaks tune
the violin synth threw this tune isn't right to my ears...maybe its the melody too..something there shouldn't be like it is in the track...it just don't suit the other elements on the tune imo
also no real feel like the tune has a break which contians a part with no breaks and then a killer break back into breaks i think that make it abit tiring to listen to it for 7 minutes...you gotta keep it interesting
what i still cant believe is that its your first production!
well i dont think that its that far from the point of doing a top production
yeah it's still a lot of work on that one too imo but probably not more than you've already done
and most of the things were done good!
keep it up mate listen to as many tunes as you can of this style
try to walk all by yourself and go to a different place in your mind while walking no matter when
the inspiration to improve it the way you'll feel it will be better will just come in one of this moments i can guaranty you!
good luck!
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Jan-21-2006 01:34
Gladius
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2002
Location: Antwerp
a bit a shame there's only 1 reply here, since it is really a great tune imo! nice breakbeats! I like the break part when the cool sounds drop in at 4:13. I like the violon too actually and to me it all fits in a way.
good track!
keep it up!
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Jan-21-2006 21:09
iloop
one love.
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: smalltown BC
its a nice track overall, relaxing and some nice elements, though after about 4min it starts to get a bit repetitive sounding... strings i think work too, but maybe some fx/more transitional elements could help out the flow of the track..
Jan-21-2006 21:45
Fearless One
midnight swim
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Poland
very good track... really enjoyed it, but i would change a bit these stings, however they ain't bad, but imo they could sound a bit better... but all in all, well produced track mate
Jan-22-2006 14:19
sentinel01
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: Philadelphia
siple but effective, i hear a really nice trance remix of this when I listen to this track.
although the kick pattern could be a little better; there is a rest close to the end of the drum pattern where there is just a choppy feel to it.
The molody could be improved; sounds like there is some false harmony there. I may be wrong though.
later.
Jan-23-2006 02:01
Paul.Vinitsky
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Moscow, Russia
Thx for comments
I'm glad that all of you in general accept the track
In future I try to consider all remarks
