Hi All,

Here's a new one I've been working on. I'm quite pleased with it so far and I thought I would post it up for some comments before I finished it off. Undecided of 1 or 2 breakdowns here, maybe could get some insight. Link:

www.davebegic.com/Aesthetic_-_Inner_Vision(Sample).mp3


-Dave.

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hey there, its a pleasant sound, but i feel the whole song sounds a bit drawn out... Great for a base as a chillout kinda trance vibe, though i suggest adding something melodicaly or rythmicaly remembrable. right now it leads to the break which only introduces a very similar piano melody, and thus making it sound a bit repetitive. I would stick to only one break too good luck with finnishing. Sounds are decently balanced, but after the break its pretty high in the high end and not enough lows to balance it out.

Alright Dave you big ****

Nice atmosphere you start off with here, and that bassline is great. That arp that is building up adds to the song as well. I like the breakdown, even though it is quite sudden. Perhaps throw in a big low string as well to widen it out a bit.
Overall though its very good Dave kid.

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Mr. Begic,
I love the start of this tune, sounds like an old Paragliders tune, w00t Oliver Lieb ftw! Nice and slow and subtle and the major/minor same-chord progression is nice and hasn't been done for a while. The bassline is excellent and the groove with the open hat and its delay is cool.
After the very sudden change in the breakdown, the melody is nice, but could have more attitude like in the intro. ILoop is right about the freqs, post break there doesn't seem to be as much bottom end. The chirping cricket noises (?) sound very cool.
You're getting better all the time dude, keep it up!

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Thanks for your comments guys, I agree with them all. I'll add back the lower pad that runs through the intro to beef up the kick in, also might have a it more of a mess with the notes, ill post up an update tomorrow.

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