anybody care to reveiw my new tune...would apreciate your comments.....

http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...5N3HDTJOU5E9L4C

or try this link....

take the drug.mp3

oldschool sound... not my style but not a descent song overall... just not my style so i don't really want to shun it... maybe others like this kinda stuff

ill keep at it... work work work slave to the rythm....he he...

Last edited by covert23 on Feb-09-2006 at 23:08

This sounds just like phasios old stuff.
I think that he used this sample in one track.
I like it because it's taking me back to those times

Some badies though:
The intro is very boring imo, nothing happends in like 1 min.
Also I think you could have shorten the echo in the end...
Your bass is loosing power every keychange...

Keep it up!

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thanks ill work on it....

Hey mate,

The bass on the intro is nice and the vocal idea a good one but a suggestion might be to lessen the repetition of the vocals there and add something else in to help the progression of the intro.

From there it builds nicely though before the vocal develops with other lines its repeated a bit too much for my liking. So maybe lessen that a bit, another idea could be to put some fx on the vocal to vary the way it sounds so its not as repetitive for example some distortion or delay effects.

The oldschool sound is very nice indeed, just some work on the vocals to add a bit more variety really. The break is nice too, good stuff.