could do with better quality MP3 mate

anyway...the kick...could punch more...it doesn't even make my sub react....

otherwise you've got some interesting melodies here, also I like that "voice" effect (is it a vocoded voice?).

Sometimes I think that some notes just sound off tune...but I'm not into hardstyle so I can't judge...

Some nice noises in there get together with someone from Hardtrancerz here and I'm sure you'll get somewhere

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get a sub base ! eq the kik a little give us a better quality mp3...
not bad stuff really....work on your eq and mastering and your doing ok........ive got a tune for reveiew called girls with wet nikers on page 2/3 .... would apreciate some comments its quite hard like yours thanks for the listen.......

Thanks for the feedback guys. Yeah, the kick is fairly weak, i think i just got sick of working on this track and failed to iron out the finer points.
Booster that voice is a sample of an indian train conductor with a lp filter and some distortion.
As far as there being wrong notes, you probably are right, I had only just started learning scales then, so i could well have fucked it up.
I will play around with it tommorow, fix the kick add some sub bass and then repost it.
Covert- I'll check your tune out when i'm home later tonight/tommorow and let u know what i think.

Many thanks for the feedback