Hello

I have been making electronic and lately melodic, uplifting Trance songs now for about 10 years, and I think
this is my best work till now! Using Cubase, vsti and some efx, this song was made in about a month.
A hard month that is

The song is an uplifting, melodic trance type, with a few vocals.
Its a trance version so therefore a climax is not until about 5:30 mins in the song.
that said, all before should be good too, I hope

I would really liked it to be played on clubs and radio-stations (my far dream) but is the song good enough???

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hei! ikke fått reviews?

Hi... Did see that you have not got any reviews... so.. I`m listening now!
hmm. I will edit this one tomorrow when I could hear is laud and with bass!

Sounds very cool at the begging, but unfortunately is dies out a bit to fast.
Really nice percs you got going! you could try a other kick! that would be nice... just try it! and the melodie is just... hmm, the melodie is abit catchy cool! ahh... cool voice samples

Ohh my good! You really need to think about the distortion of the soundimage. that lead you got really made your song to clip alot! soo. you really need to bring that into focus. make it the whole song "listen enable" damn. is so bad because its just the lead that ruin all. somehow. it makes me a bit angry :P hehe! I hear your potential, and I really will look forward to hear from you later when that potential is 10 steps higher...

About the radio-stations and clubs. you have to work on your final mixdown tuch with the db, and make it sound less damaging to the ears.

norsk: men.. det jeg sier mener jeg ikke for å være slem, men du bør begynne å jobbe med å mastre, og få volumet litt ned. hører mye kult i denne låta som må jobbes fram litt.

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Keep it up

Listening...

I like the beginning of the song...very surreal. Kind of hits hard though with the transition.

Development is pretty tight...vocals are nice too. Break at 4:50 is really cool and I like how it turns into this driving bassline. Is it from bass-station? Very energetic. The melody is wonderful as well but clips way too much!

Great potential mate. Just some small things to fix

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i can beleive this is a watermark for you: its a really good song.

man, at 5:30 it just blows the hell up.

i wouldnt really consider this uplifting trance, or at least my definition of it.

got some powerfull riffs in it.

man, this is slick. im all over this. hope you make more.

Downloading...


me hopes your tune is as good as your sig


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Focking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A Trance song from a pro, NOT an amateur!!!!!

The kick is good and the synths are also good. THE VOCALS ARE FOCKING AMAZING!!! The choice of strings suit it perfectly and the name of the song suits the sound pretty well too.



Now for my advice:

1. The LFO filtered beat at the start is too loud. The volume that you have it at later on is where it should also be at the start (maybe a little louder)

2. Your really not gonna like this one, but I think the song should DEFINITELY end at 5:31

leave them wanting more!

If this isn't what you want then at least make a shorter version so people can decide but 5:31 is where I see it ending just perfectly. Besides, i'm not too keen on the type of synth in the last half of the song.

The shorter version would go on your album and you could call the longer version the "extended version" and chuck it on a vinyl.


Once your done get a pro to master it completely and your set. this should definitely be an opener to one of your albums.



Original..... awesome...

....FUCKING BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My people this is the work of a pro!

ima listen again!

Last edited by meneedit on Feb-19-2006 at 09:06

oh yeah and 1 more thing

I noticed this is the Trance mix... what sort of version did u make before?

hey all
thanx for feedback! Apreciate it!

Rayan : godt å høre fra en landsmann
Yes, I agree with you..it dies out in the mid-song. I think Ill try to make it more interesting in the mid-start and make the hook come in earlier. Ah, thanx for voice feedback. Actually its my girlfriend singing (pitched up a bit I really had to work to get her to
sing, since she actually HATES trance! How is that even possible?!
And the mastering, maybe I should not go for the -0.01 db Limiting I just thought that is the way "they" make it..(?)

azndragon0613 I really trust the songs hook at 5:30. I think Ill make the song around that.
Bass is Access Virus with some LO harmonics to it.

Caleb: hmm, what is the defenition of the song? hmmz

Meneedit: THANX Man!! Really enoy reading your extraordinary feedback
1. Yes, I coundt get the volume up on the intro like the rest..hmm, have to try harder maybe
2. hmm, well...we cant agree and everything ..hehe
But I could make 2 songs of this? a song evolving until 5:30, and a new song from 5:31

its called a Trance mix cause of the "long" flowing intro before the hook at 5:31. (it the first version, no earlier was made
I'll make a albumd/radio verison and a club frienly mix with those boring 4/4 drums for 2 minsutes before the real song

kicks in. yes, I know the intro drums are for DJmixing, but its not home-listing-friendly

At last I wonder: Where should I go if I a make this a good version? Contact DJs`? Clubs? Radio Station? Record-labels? If the song is playable it would be nice to just "get-it-out-the" and play it all over the universe ..hehe :P

thanx guys

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Last edited by Dipzta on Feb-20-2006 at 22:28