man, that beat at first is pounding. and its not even busy right now, its just a super hard lick.

this is such a basic, low key song. it needs to be LOUDER.

the ending drags on a little too long.

make it louder then repost it.

IMO, this would be perfect about 3 mins shorter too.

interesting sound.

Thank you for your feedback, yes i know the song needs to be made louder and thats what i gotta to learn to acheive, i only done this 4 days to now, so im pretty happy overall. I used a guitar now for some extra chords in the tune from begining to the end, and the song itself chorus is playing for right time, the reason i made a longer song at end and long intro is for mixing, because im a long mix dj i like long intro and outros and thats the reason behind that alot like solar stone in their stuff. But yes i am going to have to get it louder, great feedback mate, re post it soon