ok, listening.

perc is kinda weak
bass is good but to loud imo, could use some eq-ing too
don't like the white noise
pad is the best thing till now (around 2:00)
definatly like the pads in the break, maybe too much hi end, but really good
don't like the melody that much
breakbeat percs are ok
a riff and ...... no power i was expecting something more driving
no power on the kick
too loud hats in there

could be a lot better, keep it up

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sometimes certain aspects of the track overpower others.

a couple of the sound effects are a bit sloppy sounding.

is it great, something i would suggest you turning over to a record company? no. is it bad? far from it.

i like it, and im keeping it on my HD for future listening.

thanks mates,

I know it has issues, thanks for addressing those. I'll be working on it more).


re808

I like bassline....I dont like your synth variation which must be better at about 1:40.I see there great ideas,but you need fix your sound(not tembres)....
good job...
but must be better
greetz