Just finished this one and i'm quite satisfied with it..
All criticism are welcome, if you think the track sucks, please let me know.

(http://s40.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0423UVTKA59SF0SWN1MKAE1UDZ)

Hope you enjoy it..

Last edited by Lokhèn on Mar-03-2006 at 10:32

dude you really been improving, the track sounds awesome

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nice overall sound.. the bass is awesome.. the synths are very nice.. the melody is very nice aswell.. beautiful track.. would like too see this one finished .. glad to see ur making full length stuff..

this one could i easily have heard in ASOT..

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This sounds very good! All thumbs up

The main melody is a bit boring for my taste, but it's not bad at all.

Great work!

//Alexander

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Thanks everyone..

Hey.. .the beginning is really epic, definite ASOT-style. The production is good, my only complaint is that the track seems to be mastered little bit too loud because is distorts occasionally. The melody is not memorable...but it´s not bad. I like the track´s melancholic atmosphere...the effects are top-notch... Really good!!

Cheers, Lakeus

Great stuff man, this sounds nice! Love the drive and the synths you've used sounds goodie!

Thanks Sjodalf and Lakeus.

Nice Clean sound..... see Lohken, practice makes the master.

Congrats bro

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Strong epic beginnings indeed. The melody seems a bit tempest like, but I'm not complaining about it. I've heard far more boring melodies on this driving style of trance. The bass has perfect resonance and warmth.

Your breakdown pads and melody could benifit from a change of key in one of the notes. WHen the melody rises to it's peak, I could so see a note drop a semitone. That would be one improvement that I could see enhance the melody's mood. I did a terrible job explaining myself, but I'd rather do it over a MIDI table.

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very nice trance sound with warm tones and a clean production. Melodicaly and creatively speaking, doesn't offer anything exitingly new, but the way you put together your layers suggests a professional quality about your track. good work, thanks for sharing

Very nice trancer in overall.