well you have some cool sounds in there!
but theres somethings missing, like tone shifting and perc's xD.

the acid lines are pretty cool though..

to me it feels like if you just smashed some sounds in there without any structure.

it will get better soon ill promise you that, keep up the hard work ..

btw i didnt make this post to be mean.. i think honesty is a great part in a review.

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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good

ya i'm still having trouble putting together rythym but im getting a little better at it. If you could tell me what tone shifting and percs are theat'd help a lot _YES IM AN UBER NOOB_

the track wont load for me

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Originally posted by djpulsatingforn ya i'm still having trouble putting together rythym but im getting a little better at it. If you could tell me what tone shifting and percs are theat'd help a lot _YES IM AN UBER NOOB_

if your using fruity loops ou could just right click a sampling/synth wrapper and press piano roll wich is the first option in the menu.

percs are percussion, drums of all kinds, shakers hat's snares claps etc.. all that.

if you listen to some tunes youll notice the main leads will often switch notes to make is sounds brighter or darker.

but the main thing you need to learn is structurizing i think.. there is a tutorial thread in the production area.. check it out

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

wow, that was bad. sorry for being so blunt, but man... wow
keep working on it