Afterkill = bad. Find a better sample that's not stock floops. Better yet, make your own transition.

Hats are waaaaaay too wet. You don't need that much reverb. Our ears are very easy to trick as far as reverb goes.

Synth at 1:20 is very indistinct. Reduce your effects and work on your EQing and mixing.

The sixteenth note hat run is a bit loud. Turn it down a bit. You have a lot more room with respect to hats than you think.

You have a lot of good ideas with this song, but you need to work on your mixing and processing to get those ideas across.

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what your low freq they sound a little muddy ...overall not a bad job keep it up....reveiew my tune 99 orange st by covert23 thanks...

thx anyway for your comments _ i´ll keep my work to get better!