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adam_rodriguez
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[prog trance] Magdelayna - Shattered Memories (192 kps)



hi...i started this a couple of months back and ive just got round to finishing it...some of you may know my style by now - i dont stick to the normal structure of trance and flirt between darker melodies and more melodic meloncholic stuff.....Feedback always appreciated!

Magdelayna - Shattered Memories (original mix) [192 kps]

or listen to it here :

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yo adam

thanks for pointing me to this. i didnt see you had a new track out

this sounds lush! really nice string melodies. almost like orbital velocity - the last voyage..

your kick is too loud in the mix. and you could do with a nice bit of low bass to complement it. it doesnt seam like you have much bass in your bassline..

break- this is really nice! spacey and moving your melodies have always moved me.

one thing i notice is your melodies are off time with the 4;4 pattern. sounds fresh but puts me off a bit. the same was with primary reactor
listen to 5;09... the beat comes in one or two kicks too early. the track would be a lot more driving and less experimental sounding if you sort this issue out.

you need loads more low bass taking up some headroom imo. dont give it all to your kick. and maybe add a sound on top of the kick to make it sound less dry


overall this has all the factors i love about your productions. but an even more beautiful melody.. sort out these problems and send me a 320k by five o clock cos id love to play this in my set tonight.

sort the bass mate!

great work boss

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adam_rodriguez
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ok cheers for the comments rich,i'll try and sort out the bass and kick issues...this was really just a first version to get initial feedback..

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DJ_Eternal
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Hey hey,

Ive had a listen adam and overall the production quality is really good in this one. Its not my style of trance, so forgive me if im not constructive with the feedback m8.

Kick and Percs are nice in the one, the bass you got going could be a little louder as im having probs hearing but could be my monitors

Everything sounding good...

Breakdown - Very nice synth you used there! What did you use to get that?

The Bass is actually much louder after the build up and sounds much better. More energy in the track now.

Overall i do actually like this tune bearing in mind i dont listen to this style of trance much, but i cant help but thinking its a little empty sounding at points ...

Excellent effort though

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WTF...


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i like the progression in this track, but why isnt the melody in the end featured more..or the pads in the break?

or maybe they are but get "muffled out"

I hear alot of potential in the melody, but I would´ve wanted to hear it differently, but as you mentioned this isnt your "normal trance" track.

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**Update**

ok...ive updated the link


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quote:
Originally posted by DylanSwe
i like the progression in this track, but why isnt the melody in the end featured more..or the pads in the break?

or maybe they are but get "muffled out"

I hear alot of potential in the melody, but I would´ve wanted to hear it differently, but as you mentioned this isnt your "normal trance" track.

take care,


Thanks for the comments..i didnt want to carry that main main melody on much longer or it just take the track over 10 mins...i dont think the melody gets muffled - i just add more synths to it..

really,i couldve made two separate songs out of this but as i said before,i dont follow the usual trance structure - i like to put different melodies in there!

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