Hey,
this doesnt sound bad at all.
Some nice strings and saw synths.
It sounds a little muffled overall maybe, try to give more upper-mid presence to some synths, maybe it could be useful to further compress the hats.
Interesting chord progressions. I like that melody.
Oh, and I am really liking the kick and bass too.

Good job, keep it up!

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love that!!

sounds great, but I think it all comes in way to quickly. song would be much more exiting if you had more build up.

however, sometimes it sound off-key(låter lite falskt). 0.37, 0.41,0.45,0.51...and again 1.22

like previous poster said, it all sounds abit muffled.

breakdown at 2.25 is so cool, the sample of the woman...hehe..I have a big smile on my face.

Overall I like it, but I would like to see that you break up the song, have more variations with your melodies, and do something about off-key synth..maybe another sound on it?

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