Intro: Like it, nice and mello. Nice percussion. Nice sweeping pad.

Kick isnt too hard which i like and i like the snare.

1st Breakdown: Comes in far too sudenly. Nice wee melody though.

When it comes back in after the first break its good but needs to be built up.

2nd Break: again come sin too early, let it build up first mate. Some nice elemens int heir though.

After break: Nice riff, very simple but works well, needs to be phatter as there is a lot of top end on it and not enough weight.


Overall it is very chilled out. Where is the bass? hardly any in it bass, stick anothe rbass line in their to phatten the bottom end up. You need more weight in the track. Maybe phatten the kick a little. You also need a hi-hat in their.

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