To much volume! Kick is too high. That wooshing sound cracked my speakers and ears.

The "horn"-synth doesnt seem to work with the bass. Not the following bass-line either.

the high pitched square-synth is to high, cracked my speakers and ears.

the saw-synth is the first thing that actually sounded good. melody made me nodding..

Overall you really gotta work on the volume levels and mastering. Most sounds are way to loud. The synths are not bad, nor the melody, but the composition/production is not good.

I would recommend removing the horn-synth or changing notes on it.

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Name: Magnus Karlsson
Website: Dreamworld
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alrighty.. i havent been spending too much time with this one cause i ran outta ideas for it, but ill take your comments and see what i can do with it... im just now really learning how to eq decently.. if u listen to my other track "siberia" you can tell the difference in the eqing and mixdown