hmmm starts out very good but at about 0:42 the kick disappears need that thump!!! but its sounds pretty good overall

Sounds good mate. Maybe lacking a tad in the sub-low end, although I like it deep.

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very sub., thatz cool, the squares work for me but this needs a good clean mastering imo and the frequencies knocking up a bit. overall good shit my friend.

Sounds really good to me, but just needs a dirty trance melody on top to give it that drive.
It has some nice chord changes that are all based around each other, it’s your tune, but I would put in a techno bass line and a nice a nice dirty trance lead to give it that energy it’s lacking.
It’s your tune and it sounds good, but as musicians we all see different things, it still sounds really good to me.
What are you going to do with it?

Only listening on my headphones, so I can't comment on the low end all that much, but I like it so far. I think you could punch up the kick a bit more, though.

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