sound ok on my laptop...good vocal...bit empty in parts..try layering some more elements over whats there i think it needs it...keep up the good work...review my tune twisted by covert23

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Originally posted by covert23 sound ok on my laptop...good vocal...bit empty in parts..try layering some more elements over whats there i think it needs it...keep up the good work...review my tune twisted by covert23

meh... Nou's sick of it. And im done with it too. I'll check your stuff out.

thanks for the review

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send me the project files and ill have ago then send it back to you?
what equipment do you use? i use qbase

very cool!

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Hey,
commenting as I listen...

Kick, bass and beat are very basic. You might definately need to spice it up, maybe try layering your sounds. That clap sound is pretty cheap, and there could be more work on the hihats. Try some compression/reverb, eventually try other (better) samples.
First breakdown is really cool. Nice warm bass.
The bass sound isnt bad, but its offbeat character makes this one feel like Polka, sorry I have to speak this way :P ... there is not a problem with an offbeat bass per se, maybe you might consider using longer notes.
You definately need to spice up your percussion section. More percussive elements will help a lot.
3:17 ... it seems a little off sync here. Without the clap, its okay, but the clap is really pushing the rythm in a wrong direction here, dont know how to say it clearer.
Your breakdowns with the warm strings are very nice in here. Some cool stuff at around 5:00, works really well together.

covert was pretty much right, this one still feels kinda empty. It still needs more, mainly groove by the percussion. On the other hand, mastering and balancing of elements seems pretty good to me. Some nice layering you got also
Keep it up!

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ye send me the files and samples.. i think this tune is great...just listened on a better system and it sounds great..could be massive i think..with the right elemnts..in fact im gonna start now with the audio file you posted se what i can do..he he...

Thanks for the reviews, I might try to get Nou to keep working on it. But I think he's moved on to other things.

If I get the time, I'll keep layering stuff and try give it more depth.



oh and I'll send you the stuff covert...

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hey there freaq
the intro is nice but very empty, this track is very chilled :].
the vocals are nice .
like the acidy part.

the track feels really empty as others allready have been pointing out .

bassline is kinda weird ^^ almost feels a bit gabber stile ;P.
i like the melody youve made.

nice job on this one, def. like the string work ;P

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Hey man, listenin right now

you need to add some effects to your hats, for one thing ( reverb, some delay perhaps, a little panning doesnt hurt)

nice work on the strings. excellent vocal work as well.

as mentioned before you need some percussion, (hi hats mainly), and you could fatten up your bassline just a little bit. There's nothing wrong with using a very basic bassline if it has a real good sound i think with some work on the kick , bassline , and hats you could have yourself a real hot track here. The string work as I mentioned before is real nice, and the pad sounds are real good too.. listening to this.. i could really hear a bit of piano melody in the back ( maybe where you have the synth at now) or maybe combine both! anyways, nice work and keep it goin man!

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Originally posted by Nou Man it was muuuuuuch fatter, but Freaq like messed it up!

Lol. Maybe you should learn how to mix your basslines and kicks better noober-nou? Then come and compalin to me that I messed up your bass.



TrancedentalP: sent you an email

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I like this one - the work on the vocals is great

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