I don't like it because it sounds exactly like:

Hammer & Bennett - Language (Santiago Nino Dub Tech Mix)

with a vocal layered on top of it. I hope you're not trying to pass this off as your own.

I didn't create the beats or the vocals, if that's what you mean. It is just a live-mix using two or more tracks. The base layer uses a loop of 7-second sample cut from Hammer & Bennett - Language (Santiago Nino Dub Tech Mix). The vocals are from Satoshi Tomiie - Love In Traffic.

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It's a mashup then! I'm not a producer, but as a listener I can tell you what was in obvious need of repair. First get higher sound quality tracks. Second I noticed your beatmatching was a little off so tighten that up. Finally we arrive at the lack of any variation in your track. If you want to keep listener glued to your mix include some variation with breaks or something similar. Sorry I can't be of any more help, but every little bit counts.

StevieBoy,

Thanks. Will definitely keep that in mind.

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