ok I updated the track. finally I've finished the break (although I think I have some more small things to work on).

info: 2:11 mins, all parts of the track including the break (haven't finished the climax yet ). quality is 192kbps.
link: (Link removed)

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heya guys, it's been a while since I posted something here (mainly because of school)

anyway, just wanted you to listen and post your opinions about a new project i'm working on atm, called Exiled - an uplifting trance (137 bpm as far as I remember). I'm working on this one quite hard, and I think this is the one I'm finally gonna send out to djs/labels etc.

info: it's a 2:26 min preview of the intro + buildup til the break (sorry but I haven't finished the break + climax parts yet).
quality: 96kbps at the highest encoding mode.
file size: 1.6mb

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thanks
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Last edited by ronk on May-29-2006 at 16:54

hey ronen!

yeah, indeed long time no post from you!

excited what i'll hear!

*dl finished* here we go:

sounds cool so far...nothing that really disturbs me...although i'm not a big fan of that kinda-sine sound...but it#s just a matter of taste...

waiting for more...

// Lars

thanks Lars, appreciate the feedback I'll update the sample soon (I hope at least)

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hey
downloaded your sample
i think its really good...
the kick sounds a bit ...well.. wrong...maybe thats the wrong word..but its just my opinion..
i like the in/.out effects as well
plus the sine sound makes me think there s a really good lead/synth coming in the finished version, especially the way it modulates at the end of the pattern..

please send me a pm when the final version is up...i definitely want to check it out

cheers

EDIT: i just saw your sig with the links to your other productions....will check them out as well..

Good production, would like to hear the full works.

Kick smacks through too much in my opinion though and almost makes you wince after a while. Makes anotherwise beautiful track a little hard to listen to.

Cheers
Nem

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thanks for the comments smakmagik and Nemesis. I'll try to improve the kick as much as I can.

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Hey man, liking the sound of this so far. Hard to give decent feedback on it because of the quality of the mp3, but from what I can hear its sounds pretty solid so far. Just the kinda thing im into, look forward to hearing more of this as it progresses

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Nice deep kick, subtle bassline.. pads are nice! 1:01
sweet filterwork.. squarelead works well ... but gets a bit monotonous but maybe I shouldnt complain.. lead changes in pretty unannounced, wich ís good in this case ! good work! like to hear more

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Quality production.

I love the atmosphere in the beginning. Sounds very dark with subtle noises and building bassline. Gets me going! Kick seems to have a bit too much like distinction...but then again when do I know kicks! What do you use for the atmosphere and sweepish synths. I really like them.

Whole thing sounds very promising. Only thing I think could improve is the percussion. SEems to die out after everythign kicks in. Make the hits fatter and this would be awesome!

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thanks for the positive feedback appreciate it.

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