Avengie...I like the piano sound, the choral sound, very swimming-esque. Reminds me of being under wtaer. I was very happy when the fat lead came in. I only have a few concerns:

Harmonically, going from Bb, G-, C, F ..........going to that C, the release tails of the choral really clash. I think the progression that you were going for may be with a C- instead, except I know how cliche it sounds. I think honestly that's the only thing that really tweaked my head a bit. The rest of it sounds pretty cool. Good atmosphere.

I don't know, I hope I don't sound out of line and I don't mean it in an offensive way. Anyone else share my sentiment about the C major chord?

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Yeah man.... thanks....

But i wasnt going to a C- i was doing a C but i spent alot of time making that lead sound... lol alot of deleting, cutting and pasting lol but... The choral sound, it is not really on the correct key sometimes.... i have to follow my ear coz playing C in choral comes out like an F... I took that choral from Fruity loops Chorusses in The packs...

Thanks alot...

Cheers...

Definitely bro, no schaweat! PM me with a link to your progress if you'd like sometime. I'd be honored.

-Arudius

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others????

Ha, Ha, Ha! No, you will never get patience!

Its fun to hear something uplifting from you and this make me happy! (I cant give any pronounce about that C chord, my ear isnt good enogh so to me, it sounds good ). Keep it up man!

Akia