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Bruce

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Der Mystik's Music

thanks

Bruce Gibbons - Secrets & Lies

This track starts off with a horrible sounding kick, odd leads used here. I mean, I know you looked for originality, but you better try other lead sounds. Seriously, look for a better kick, and use compression on it.
After the break, the tracks fades into the same melody phase of the intro, those leads are really ear bleeders. Besides the melelody is quite too happy for me, and that bassline could be warmer, is really flat and cheesy in my opinion.

This track is extremely repetitive. 9 minutes of the same melody, horrible kick, aweful leads, clipping everywhere (Due to the fact the kick is not using compression I suppose).

I certainly didn't like this track, but keep working on new tracks, the more you practice the better you'll get, I know for experience because I used to make horrible sounding tracks, and only practice is getting me better and better.

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Der Mystik's Music

thanks for the advice, ill keep working & practiceing ill get it right one day....lol