Hi friends,

this is my new production again...
i think i miss something in it.. so need ur feedbacks!

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it's good to hear some fresh new stuffs again... this is some tight choon! great work!... keep it up man!

Ewww @ that bassline. Too much resonance on it or something

Intro lacks interest for me... i had to skip through it... could summerize the entire 2.5 min intro in about 20 seconds if you get my meaning.

Pretty nice fill thingy at 3:20-ish... kinda loses it when the kick comes in. Melody is ok... nothing that sticks out in my head at all... seems to drag on and on and on....

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Ill be honest
the bassline is a miss.. I dont like it either
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the pads give it more atmostphere, but it still sounds very thin..
I guess it has to little lows/basses..
the arpeggio sounds nice but then again, too thin..
when the kick comes in around 2:52, I'd give it a little boost around the 50 hz.. like 1,5 maybe 2 dB.. so its got more oomph if you know what I mean..
(a cool idea could also be a really heavy basspad) coming in after the break..
in the end the track sounds really sweet and nice, just missing some lows.. theyll add alot I think!!

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kinda agree with the basslin, but it gives the track it's energy; it's way too prevalent in the midrange.

not so happy about the percs, sound like sample CD fare and don't do anything too interesting.

tune wise, it's got potential

it's missing a lot of "production" I guess, messing with the eqs and adding some space to the mix with a little reverb and panning here and there.

hope that this helps

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Not a fan of the bassline either. I don't think I like the kick that much either. Maybe a more punchy kick instead of snare sounding one. Not sure what it's missing, but...the whole mix sounds kind of weak. Whether it be too thin or what, it needs more energy and the lower freqs could help with that.