Hello!

I made this track a couple weeks ago, and completed it today.
It's more trancy than psyish imo, kinda dark
I know there is some things that could need some work, but im to lazy to fix it right now
So what do you think about it?

Speactra - Lullaby

Cheers,
Alexander

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Last edited by Speactra on Sep-17-2006 at 18:53

I'm bumping this right now so I can review it when I have time, either later today or tomorrow

Listneing...

The freqeuncy of the high hats sounds a bit high. A bit clippy?
The child bedtime sample is great. It's a good introduction to this psy lullaby...

Nice bass drum. I love the groovy bass pattern.

2:06 a bit of an early break?
2:29 ...Nice
2:40 like the hihats now. great drive.

3:25 Break... that distorted fx is sweet.... Nice...
3:50 Awesome new lead on the build up. Great work!
4:19 lots of energy. The lead synth could be turn up a bit IMO.
5:10 Nice layering mate. The mood is dark & menacing & the energy high. I Love the sound of the multiple layers of unisoned leads.
6:20 I like the child sample. It brings a mysterious after sleeping hours theme to the tune.
7:00 Im digging the melody. It's like a evil lullaby chant. Great stuff mate!

This tune has a killer theme. The love the lead synth patterns. The structure is really good, although some of the energy is lost a bit in the breaks; but then again, the breaks add an eerie atmophere to the theme of the tune.
In some place the lead synth could be turned up a bit, but thats about it. Thanks for sharing Speactra

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A really psy/scary atmosphere the vocal is great! I not use to listen mutch to psy but good music is always good music... Well done!

Takere!

Akia

Thank you!
I'm sure that the hihats dont clip, but i can admit that they are a bit earpiercing

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The muffled bassline is neat. Creates a trancy feel right off the bat. The cutoff modulating synth helps, too.

I like the pitchbending synth.

I also like what you're doing there with the sample.

There are too many breakdowns in the intro. It's really hard to pick up a groove in this song.

4:05 could have started off without the hats and added them later, IMO.

I like this one. It's a good track for a Psy intro set.

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Thank you jex

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Oltha Downtempo, Experimental NEW

great job man.

very warm and enjoyable track.

as i have said, i think the vocals are used a bit too much. but apart from my minor niggle i think this is very good work. great drive that will work well on a psy arena.

keep up the shit hot work alex!

rich

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dont listen to the other guy...the hats are perfect..good track, cheers mate

Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoy it

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Very good track, I did hear the hats ok, i dunno but it doesn't clip to me at all.
Intro is ok to start with a good psy set. Very nice job m8.

Peace...

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Thanks
Great to hear that the hats sounds ok

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Lisa Miskovsky - Still Alive (Speactra Remix)
Speactra - Desicions

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MYSPACE:
Speactra Trance, Progressive, Psy
Oltha Downtempo, Experimental NEW