Hey!

We need help with this! It is PhilB`s first vocal song so any suggestion on how to make it sounds better would appreciates very mutch! PhilB has produced everything and I have written the lyrics and singing it.



****Final version****

http://philb.jamura-music.com/audio/Knight_of_Dark.mp3


Thank you so mutch for your advices, suggestions and kind words, that has helped us a lot!


Akia & PhilB

Last edited by Akia on Oct-07-2006 at 16:13

nice tune, nice vocals, nice voice, i liked it

any chance you could maybe post the lyrics?

thanks,

Bidor

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Listening now...

I like the track for the most part. Percussion is pretty sweet. I'm not really a fan of the bassline. Doesn't fit in my mind. The vocals need some tuning with autotune or something and they're also too loud in the mix. I think the track needs some filtering or something to give it a techy side or something. A pretty decent track, but could use some more work. Nice job though

Thank you guys! Here comes the lyrics:


Knight of Dark

You come with the North
you Knight of Dark
to catch a broken soul
you collect your cards.
Hunting in the moonshine
a shadow on the path
get scent of a hidden sore
nothin fails your sense.

Closen eyes
I can not see
I´m not an angel
and I will never be.
Give me love
fill my emptyness
a second in my life
and you own me at rest.

I just want to feel.
I just want to feel.
I just want to feel.

You come with the North
you Knight of Dark
to catch a broken soul
you collect your cards.
Waiting in the moonshine
I can hear your breath
creeping tight around
feel a heat in my chest.

A flame in the night.

Last edited by Akia on Sep-09-2006 at 18:14

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Originally posted by Akia Thank you guys! Here comes the lyrics: Knight of Dark You come with the North you Knight of Dark to catch a broken soul you collect your cards. Hunting in the moonshine a shadow on the path get scent of a hidden sore nothin fails your sense. Closen eyes I can not see I´m not an angel and I will never be. Give me love fill my emptyness a second in my life and you own me at rest. I just want to feel. I just want to feel. I just want to feel. You come with the North you Knight of Dark to catch a broken soul you collect your cards. Waiting in the moonshine I can hear your breth creeping tight around feel a heat in my chest. A flame in the night.

nice lyrics.. now i heard you singing... but i would really like to hear some productions of yours!

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No, you wont !

Last edited by Akia on Sep-09-2006 at 17:39

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Originally posted by Akia No, you want !

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Belive me, there is a reason why I not produce...

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Originally posted by Akia Belive me, there is a reason why I not produce...

why not? im sure your productions arent that bad!

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Haven´t produce anything att all, have no talent for that. I´m just a writer.

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Originally posted by Akia Haven´t produce anything att all, have no talent for that. I´m just a writer.

everyone isnt good in the beginning.. even dj's like tiesto, pvd, sasha etc.. why not try and play with some programs and see how good you really are in producing?!

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Originally posted by Akia Hey! We need help with this! It is Montalrays` first vocal track so any suggestion on how to make it sounds better would appreciates very mutch! Montalrat has produced everything and I have written the lyrics and singing it. http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...47809F96E008D4A Thanks! Akia

Hey Akia

I'll have a listen to this tommorrow, my connection is giving me shit at the minute, so downloading it now would be perilous
So I'll review tommorrow.

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