Hi again

Beginning..that filtered kick confuse me...because when comes normal kick I don't know where is starting point of beat..and only after bassline I can trip with my foot.

For me the Bassline is a bit too loud(maybe 2-5%)(thats only my opinion )

Bassline is great,percs very cool..strings very nice...piano-bell NICE MELODY!

yap melody must be on higher level of volume(thats what I said about bassline level).
Break beaty part very cool..and then bassline aghhh..
maybe I would make layer of snare on this stick...
UK relexing style...

Great Idea...but I think you must finish it to the smallest part of it...
sorry for my "great" language..


Birdie

nice one

keep it up dude

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[2:26 - 2:34] What serenity you have there. Ahh.. I love it.

[3:55] The percussion changes a bit too abruptly for such a smooth relaxing track. Perhaps echo it out at that point in triplets?

Wondering if that rhythm synth (the one that goes along with the bass rhythm) goes a bit too far out of tune. Sure, it adds some flavor, which is nice.

I really dig it, thanks for the free download! The quality is wonderful. This one is on my playlist!

Good luck with this next year, I'm looking forward to hearing more great stuff!

thank you so much for the great feedback guys, thanks for the support and glad to share this with ya...

after 167 downloads in the first day and 271 downloads until today from the server and a couple of remix request. I just wanted to repost here and thank you for all the feedback and offer anyone the chance of remixing this track.

I have put up the midi file here ->>>>> Click

You can even host the track on the ILM servers if you want, our forum alows for 10Meg attachments...

listening to your track now:

like the filtered intro

base is cool, sounds a bit like tiesto, needs another melody and the winning stabs on the riff are quite annoying


needs more fx, clash's and double kicks

i like the way you bring in the strings and pads, though they need to be MUCH more dominant as they are quite uphoric

like the piano....

i would put another synth playing chords in where the break beat is

the drop is gash. needs snare roles and sweeps

faten this up and it will be quite good!

*check out my tune avons calling and tell me what you think*

all the best

ARRY the ****

hey thanks for the feedback harry very opinionated and constructive- just the way i like it, i will check out your tune and post some back