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Vivid Boy
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O
got bored studyin

so i came up with a pretty cool verse.

tell me what u think its dedicated to my friend kevin who died when i was 14


I dont think it was meant to be
for he lost his life the same day he met me
and honest-ly, at the age of four-teen
we would prbably, throw away our lives by the age of twenty three
so we ain't we, he died in wat-er
he didnt bother that week to wear a perserv-er
and thats why he didnt des-erve, so i have to make sure his memory lives thru my words
so me, I'd- have- pref-ered,to accept the invitation tho the thought makes me shiv-er
that we could have porbab-ly, been deliv-ered at the same time as each-oth-er
the time was for he for sure,
the time shield my turn,
and maybe we can be we,again when the time has turned
and fina-lly, ur time was to short to share
and i ask god why he's been so unfair
we lost one

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medinaM5
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Los Angeles

over what beat?

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jonSun
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quote:
Originally posted by medinaM5
over what beat?


In My Memory


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Vivid Boy
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O

lost ones

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enferno
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: jesus land

i rea-lly like i-t
yea-aa-aa-aaaa
no-t

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wizniz
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quote:
Originally posted by jonSun
In My Memory


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Vivid Boy
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O

quote:
Originally posted by enferno
i rea-lly like i-t
yea-aa-aa-aaaa
no-t


i wish i knew a better way to express pauses but i dont. so bear with it


by the way. my friend kevin died when i was a little teenie bopper. we were a lil more then acquaintinces for years but we got close the last day he died, when we skipped class and smoked joints and chilled all day. he invited me and to his cottage for that weekend and i bailed last minute and he ended up dying that night in a boating accident

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Ivand
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Registered: Aug 2005
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quote:
Originally posted by Vivid Boy
i wish i knew a better way to express pauses but i dont. so bear with it


by the way. my friend kevin died when i was a little teenie bopper. we were a lil more then acquaintinces for years but we got close the last day he died, when we skipped class and smoked joints and chilled all day. he invited me and to his cottage for that weekend and i bailed last minute and he ended up dying that night in a boating accident


so he died several times and then the last day he died you got close to him?


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Vivid Boy
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Registered: Sep 2001
Location: T.O

quote:
Originally posted by Ivand
so he died several times and then the last day he died you got close to him?


no dumbass he died once. the same day we got close, before we were like school friends but only chilled due to having similar friends. he was a really cool guy at the time, alot of people looked up to him because he was a genuine friendly guy, that would give his left leg for u

anyways i dont know why i would bring anything personal up on these boards anyways. stupid me ,really. but u could show some respect for the memory of a person who passed eventho i know u dont know him or me.

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Marc Summers
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: New York, USA

im bored citing work


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eRRaTiK
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Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada

quote:
Originally posted by Vivid Boy
by the way. my friend kevin died when i was a little teenie bopper. we were a lil more then acquaintinces for years but we got close the last day he died, when we skipped class and smoked joints and chilled all day. he invited me and to his cottage for that weekend and i bailed last minute and he ended up dying that night in a boating accident


sorry to hear that. respect to kevin.


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FliptheSwitch
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Registered: Nov 2006
Location: 07875

aww im sorry... ive lost friends also.... my condolences

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