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TrAnCe CoNtRoL
Made of Love
Registered: Jan 2001
Location: D Town, Michigan, USA/DTA #9
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good melody and all...but those vocals really dont fit the song. i dont like the idea of alternative music for vocals.
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Mar-26-2002 05:19
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kparker
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Dallas, Texas
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Mar-26-2002 19:46
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Icone
In Dreams...

Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium
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Mar-26-2002 20:54
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McBigMac
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2002
Location: Insane Asylum
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First........
those vocals have nothing to do in that song, they directly ruin it really bad. God whyd u guys put em in there? yiiiikes........
The song has good although standard buildups, i like the percussion and groove in it very much.
The bass however is way too dry. Try adding echo/reverb here, might help. And the sound generally sounds way too "fruity"........i dunno if u use fruity or not, but it has that general sound almost all fruity users have a problem getting rid off.
Now the melody, is good but isnt exactly the big anthem, could use some catchiness. It doesnt really stay in your mind like many other tunes... Nothing much to do here than keep writing...
Although good work, here, a good song with structure, good to see that some people know what they are doing, now its just taking it the next step.
Good work keep it up guys.
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Mar-26-2002 22:07
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