A sample off another track that Ive done.
Ive gone wild on the bass and the kickdrum for this one.

Check it out and lemme hear your thoughts.


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Last edited by coldblack on Jan-13-2007 at 15:18

Sorry but I don't understand your track

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....:::: S U N CL Y D E R ... M U S I C :::...
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A quick warning, don't listen to this through headphones... Head in a vice is the only way I can put it

I can't really think of anything to say about the track. Intresting for 20 seconds I guess, but just plain uncomfortable after that.

I like the effects, they create a scary atmosphere! But imo it miss a main melody that take you through. Some nice ideas! Keep working!


Takere!

Akia

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@Andrew_L
Hmmm...Well, interesting feedback. But What do you mean by "plain uncomfortable"? Thing is, I did want this to go a bit harsh on the ears, but can you please elaborate? Thanks!

@Akia
Yup, I was looking to keep it dark sounding. Im not really looking to create dance friendly or uplifting/positive type trance...
The "main melody" starts just when the sample ends. Im just tweaking the track now.


Thanks for your comments people. I do appreciate it.

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i like your atmospheric kick sounds... to describe it like that...

i have some great ideas for some melodies though... still missing that part.... i guess in my tracks its the opposite, ha...

keep workin @ it, iim sure you were in a different planet creating this track...

cheers,

nico

p.s. maybe you can critique my ''outbound'' track??

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hehe thanks for checking it out. Yes, I was in a different planet when I made it.
I re-EQd it and it sounds different now. I am also adding some samples and vox to it. I will share it with you all as soon as I make my myspace profile.

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Hey,

Like that dark vibe you have going.

But at 0:20 seconds i wasn't too fond of this next sound. it just sounds to me like too much delay. maybe try using a triplet delay, or add some off beat sounds to not make it sound so loopy, unless that's what your going for.

But I think you've got something solid for the first 20 seconds though.

Peace.

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Thanks for checking it out dude!
I did want to add a certain feel of "heaviness" to it through bass and kicks.
Though the bass/kick patterns are quite simple really, I looked to create an atmosphere around the bassline/kicks through the cicada type sounds.

Thanks for your feedback again!

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