Soft kick, really nice! The pads and fx´s sounds awesome! The only thing I think of is that you could build it up more in the intro. Otherwise nothing, I enjoyed!
Takere!
Akia
Feb-12-2007 10:35
BOOsTER
Holding Infinity
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Sea of forgetfulness
hi there, first of all thanks for your review on my track.
then...well some nice sounds, nice intro, nice kick...might be a bit weak but that's more a matter of taste...nice FX.
that sidechained synth could be a bit more dirty...like use a distortion or somethin
very cool melody, great sounds...and the buildup weee...love this
cool and dreamy.
a bit to the general master...it seems to me the mids are a bit too strong...
overall great job ! finish it, get some decent mastering ... and you definitely should be half-way to be signed
Love how the track starts reminds me of G&D, I hear you have done some work on the lows sounds much betetr and cleaner now. You could make the track even more interesting, the vocal sample gives it a very underground feel. I like this but its still a litle bit monotone.
You need a leed . And I would suggest a Guitar riff that would fit this like glove. Overall I like this but needs some more work.
Keep it up ! / Mavve
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Feb-13-2007 00:37
Takkra
Smile if you want it.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
ik heb je eerste versie niet gehoord maarja.. ik zal ff commenten op deze
*holland*
agitatingly slow the track starts its descent to my hard drive while I gently fill yet another glass with a delicate liquid.
After the redeeming beep from my speakers I start to scan the screen looking for the track, gently directing my cursor to the folder I had stored it in.
enough blabla.
Nice subtle kick, lovely groove..
introduction of a loungy synthpad nice!!
filtered tiesto'ish synth hits suit the pad/bass well
a highpitched high freq. synth kicks in which doesn't really go well imo.
nice breakbeat
again that high freq synth .
3:45 nice !
very well mixable outro.
overall very nice job!! a nice chill track!
P.S.
(bij welke studie heb je nog tijd hiervoor ? want ik wil nl volgend jaar tandheelkunde doen maar ik wil mn producen niet opgeven )