Hi everyone!
Its been awhile since I actually got a track done, so here im sharing it with you. It’s the unmastered version and there is still lots of room for improvement so im looking for some good constructive critics here.

Btw I cut the intro and outro out and also faded some parts. Just in case I make some more progress with this one, hope you are ok with this.

Cheers!


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Last edited by DJ-Kreing^^ on Mar-15-2007 at 20:04

Come on guys i would really appreciate some feedback here.

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Roman, the second link is expired.

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Last edited by DJ Kenosis on Mar-25-2007 at 23:49

Listening ....

- I think the kick may be a tad too high
- the breaks kind of threw me for a second, but overall it contributes well to the track. I like how you go into breaks periodically.

- Very nice feel at around the 1:30-2:00 range and 2:30-3:15.
You could probably do something more to develop this a bit as it gets just a bit too minimalistic for my tastes. But the feel of the track is pretty nice.

- Not into the high synth pattern that comes in around 2:15 and 3:45-4:45. It sounds very off key.



Overall, if you could get rid of that offkey pattern then I think you're definitely onto a good opening track for a psytrance set.

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