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Listening, can hear a strong concept right away, those acid synths fits well, pads are great, gets a little repetitive tho, id add some clashes and sweeps, melody is interesting and unique, may i suggest some drum rolls, rhythm is not too busy considering with all instrumentation going on in the back, your bass however, just my own preference, since i am psy head, you could make it more edgy or make it slide from time to time (try to boost up the mids a little, or since your kick already takes a lot of your low end, try to cut some of that and give the rest to the bass), changing octaves could create a sense of variation, got even some lyrics there  "energy" very nice. In terms of arrangement however, you have great build ups, changes in interesting ways, however i wish it could be more busier than this. Instrumentation is great, however on the build up, try maybe different percussion samples just to again create variation, that would account for overall song structure to make it different from norms. In terms of performance, I know you've been doing this for quite a while so overall mixing sounds very clean and balanced to me, altho i need to get back home and listen to this on big system, sounds fine in headphones, your techniques are great, however it is more of up and down, no special fx.
Overall I like it, very unusual from your previous projects, would like to hear finished version
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thanks for the feedback.
