Nice track It would be much better if you had a second melody palying along with the main lead cause it gets repetitive after 2 or 3 loops Nice job until now



Would mind reviewing my track?

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You have two single kicks in between the beginning and the end of your build up and I think they don't really add very much to build up the track to the main section. I think you really need something extra to build up the track.

Of what little strings I heard in the breakdown, it made me want to hear more of it after the break. I was brainstorming ideas and I thought that a deeper string would be great for the main section to make it more dramatic.

I like the main melody.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

I Just love the way how you build it up, so powerful! Keep working!


Takere!

Akia

Thanks guys, your comments are right in line with my thoughts.

peace
sentinel

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Originally posted by DJSentinel Hey guys, Sentinel here. I am posting this "halfway" finished track for technical and musical feedback. I hope you enjoy it and I think its probably my best work thus far. Goliath (Original Mix) [Sample] http://www.sendspace.com/file/h4x1b8 any feedback at all appreciated thanks sentinel

Hey my good friend

Cool your working on a new track, and you named you track after my nick I use one all forums around on the net AWESOME

I can defintely hear you trying to follow up Alphazone sounds, You are using a verry Dark and Aggressive sound. Still needs to do some more with it. Looking forward hearing a full version of it. Good luck, Keep it up my friend

Sorry not been on Msn much latest month, dealing with some personal stuff, should be on Msn soon again hopefully.

Hope your doing fine and had a nice Easter, have still a nice Easter

Take Care of you Buddy

C'ya soon again.

Best & Kindest Regards Espen.

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Thanks man, hope to see you back on MSN too, we have lots of things to talk about

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Originally posted by DJSentinel Thanks man, hope to see you back on MSN too, we have lots of things to talk about

Your welcome my friend

I hope so to I will be back on Msn soon.

Jepp we have not talked in long so we have alot to catch up. Or maybe it is something special you wanne talk to me about, some great news or something. Damn you made me Curious now :P

Have a great Tuesday

C'ya Soon Buddy

Regards Espen.

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Originally posted by Goliath_10 Your welcome my friend I hope so to I will be back on Msn soon. Jepp we have not talked in long so we have alot to catch up. Or maybe it is something special you wanne talk to me about, some great news or something. Damn you made me Curious now :P Have a great Tuesday C'ya Soon Buddy Regards Espen.

Little bit of both ;-)

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