I don't know the original, so I don't know if the vocal editing is yours, but it sounds good (radio effect). The sound on the offbeat annoys me though. Percussion could use some work. Overall not a bad track, but I don't feel like the track is going anywhere either.

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All rhythm evolves around a kick...

Very smooth, I like it

I do agree on the offbeat sound though, it gets a little old after a while.

Thanks for taking a look at my track by the way - it was my first go at making something "professional" sounding, and obviously I have some work to do.

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Let the music take control...

Thanks for the comments you two

I'll see what I can do about the off beat "be" sample.

I don't want to get rid of it completely, I'll try to make it more tolerable though.

Anybody else?

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