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This is my second track. Theres no complexity to the name either, i finished
it last night at 12 o'clock . any comments or criticism is welcome.

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Don't get me wrong but I feel like I have just listened to a straight line...

Some very interesting ideas but this definately needs a bit of melodical variation. I do think that you could develop this further though.
For a second track it's ok but could do with some musical direction as it sounds more like an experiment in sound, which in some ways it might be.

That said, experimentation is key to your development and I think you are on the right track. I would like to hear more of what you do to see how you get on. Keep at it and it will pay off.

Cheers
Nem

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yeah i know i have a lot to learn still. im really only messing about with the hardware and software that i have. but it didnt really take me too long to produce 2 tracks so hopefully i can get to analyzing my tracks more carefully and producing more melodic instrumental stuff. thank you for your encouragement. im sure it will help me.

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