hey guys ive been working on this tune for ages, this tune really represents my style of making music.. im proud to be sharing this with you guys, so please feedback would be perfect, and i return reviews.

enjoy,.

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cheers.,.


Bidor

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Last edited by Rinster on Jun-12-2007 at 23:33

Nice dude im getting into this. Ah, you have some notes off key. Could use another melody but it's pretty tight none the less. Let me get the pack see about a remix. I took a long enough break from producing. See what i can do.

Keep it up!

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Again the beats are awesome, I really like the way everything sits in the mix and the sounds are very fat, I don't know that I could recomend anything to do with this...

I think the mixing is great. Sounds, melody, rhythms all contribute to a dark feel.

3:07: Great shot of energy coming in.

Can't help but agree with gwrmarines about the off key stuff. Could be due to the sounds being in the same low range. Either way it might be worth taking a second look at.

Nice driving beats man!

"Keep it up!"

I second that.

thanks guys, glad you all like it!

feedback returned as promised.

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Nice sounding percussion like the white noises.

Think the track misses a pumpin dark bassline though.

The fx sounds you use are cool.

The track could do with some snare builds in various places before

the kick drum comes back in.

Think you've got an excellent appreciation of levels and the

percussion is tight but there isnt really much of a breakdown to get

everyone truly rocking and the track seems to end abruptly.

Some good ideas missing a few elements to take the dancefloor by the

scruff of the neck!

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Originally posted by dj-holocaust Nice sounding percussion like the white noises. Think the track misses a pumpin dark bassline though. The fx sounds you use are cool. The track could do with some snare builds in various places before the kick drum comes back in. Think you've got an excellent appreciation of levels and the percussion is tight but there isnt really much of a breakdown to get everyone truly rocking and the track seems to end abruptly. Some good ideas missing a few elements to take the dancefloor by the scruff of the neck!

thanks mate, i see what you mean with the bassline ill see what i can do with that.. there is a short breakdown where the pads jump in.,. but i kinda wanted to make this song more progressive aswell.

glad you liked it man.,. and thanks for the feedback! appreciate it.

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Bumpy

a remix made by ta member "Gwrmarines" is in my sig..
check it out, and ill return feedback

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Bidor

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i like this, try playing more with the hrad sounds/ snares

nice squirkin on that bass filter or sometin, and what re you saying there?

still a rough draft i assume, try adding reverb to the percs a bit!

keep on pushin...



I like the break part!

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Hey man, very nice peace of music, exceptionally well mixed and good to both chill and dance to when the mood is right. Would deffo recommend this one....4****

TN

thanks guys for the feedback., . appreciate it!


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Anybody else?

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