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I like the way everything comes in at first, particularly the arpeggiated sounds. I'm not sure about switching up into breakbeat when the main lead comes in though. You go there and then go away from it too quickly in my opinion. Maybe if you dropped out the drums and put the breakbeat part in after that. I like the tone of the bass. The playing around with the lead later on sounds a little cheesy, no offense. I think the buildup and breakbeat part later on in the song after the drums drop out works better than the first time. I like the shimmery arpeggiated voice a lot too.
Peace, Agent Starchild
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Agent Starchild
Durham, NC, USA
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Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility
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