The bass is sexy. It's making my subwoofer happy. I also like the cymbal sweeps or whatever they are when you bring new parts in and out. The main lead or perhaps its melody doesn't quite get me like the arpeggiated stuff. I'm wondering if you should drop out your percussion and have the part that comes in at 4:07 come in earlier in the song. It seems like having drums come in and out a little more earlier in the song might help. Please check out my songs.

Peace, Agent Starchild

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Agent Starchild
Durham, NC, USA

Those who share the wealth of their knowledge will end up far wealthier and more loved. Those who use their knowledge as a throne from which to sneer at others will never have a true friend.

Tracks-in-progress (Please help me make these better):
Eve of the Invasion
The Realm of Possibility