I'm far from being an experienced producer but I'll do my best to give you some feedback:

I like the overall mood and melody of this track, it seems to have an old-school sound to it. I would personally prefer it if the melody itself would evolve a bit more though. It's a good tune, I just find it gets repetitive and needs to break out into something a little more dynamic. It could just be my personal taste. Also it's most likely the stream but the quality seemed a bit low. Otherwise I'm liking the track and the small details you've added do help with the repetitive structure a bit. I think it has the potential to be great. Hope you keep hammering at this one.

Equos

i really like that bassline !!!!!!
fxs = nice shit!!!

melodys.....to trancy, to normal, try new things, trance is more than the typical "trancelines"

you need to work more on your sound quality, but thats something you will understand i work better with time.

nice track!!!!!
keep up, like yout ideas

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Thanks for the comments. I am going to work on the melody line and try to evolve the whole thing a bit further.
One question. When you say I need to work more on my sound quality do you mean improving the sound quality of individual synths or the overall quality?

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Originally posted by moodshaper Thanks for the comments. I am going to work on the melody line and try to evolve the whole thing a bit further. One question. When you say I need to work more on my sound quality do you mean improving the sound quality of individual synths or the overall quality?

overall quality....
hmm have you ever heard of Izotope 3?
its an amazing way of make your tracks sound a lot better

chek it
http://la.m-audio.com/products/es_la/iZotopeOzone3-main.html

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Yes, my buddies use Isotope in the studio when they help me master tracks. It's a 'must have'
Thanks for the feedback.

mirage v3 is very nice and progressive...keep it up

i go round is cool..

invidious rocks..

i walk alone is nice too

good stuff my friend...

Thank you.
I'm glad you like them