One of the comments on the last track (numerous times), was that it lacked a wow factor. I tried to put a bigger climax for this track, I'm not sure if I succeeded or not.
Sorry for the very short sample, I'm not happy enough with the arrangement to really put up anything larger . I know it's tough to judge something thats so short, but any thoughts would be great.
This is fucking great man, that distorted synth is great. My only grudge about the main lead is I wish it had a little glide from 1:18 to 1:30. But thats me, percussion and bass are fantastic. The background synths in the beginning are so great, you should really get your stuff out if you haven't already.
Oct-24-2007 21:22
B_man
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The track has a smooth, almost housey tone to it. Is this detroit house (lol)? The 909 kick is simple and eloquent, but for some reason I think it could be better. Then, once the awesome distorted synth comes into play, it sounds more techy and progressive at the same time.
Originally posted by B_man
The track has a smooth, almost housey tone to it. Is this detroit house (lol)? The 808 kick is simple and eloquent, but for some reason I think it could be better. Then, once the awesome distorted synth comes into play, it sounds more techy and progressive at the same time.
So far so good... from what I heard.
Fix'd
But thanks man
Jupter: I'm actually working on a group of some tracks that I plan on sending around, it's just a matter of getting some B sides finished in case things happen :P. Thanks for the kind words
I'll work on it a bit, and try to add something to the main line when it comes in. It does sound a bit weird now that you mention it .
yo this is some hot shit here. like the sidechained dirty bass. great percs. definitely seems very prog to me but a higher energy "tech" mix would be badd.
. I know it's tough to judge something thats so short, but any thoughts would be great.
