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I am liking the mood of this myself. It is uplifting and adventerous at the same time. Feeling wise, the melody and overall timbre of the track make me feel like looking through the eyes of victory after a storm of hopelessness.
The string part after the arping saw synth died down was smart. It reinforced the message in a soundtrack-like conclussion.
That being said, I will share what I think could be improved upon. For starters, I think the arrangement of the tune could be planned according to making your melody a chorus of a sort, and adding a more planned build-up, release, refrain, and verse (so to speak). It doesn't have to be a very complicated structure, either. Not only would this break up the feeling of repetitiveness that comes 2/3rds into your track, but it would heighten your production values because of different elements being managed in the mix causing you to think more critically about each individual element. I do not usually mix supersaw trance, but I think the bassline could have a little more "oomph" in the lower frequencies only.
I'm sure others will have better opinions of mine if they post. Good job at an epic feel.
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