Hello All.

Just finished my first production while learning the Logic software..any feedback would be appreciated.

Track can be heard at www.myspace.com/wesili

Thanks,

Wesili

"always believe in the spirituality of the rhythm"

Last edited by Wesili on Nov-28-2007 at 21:27

That's nice and kwerky.

The tracks got a nice drive to it too.

Cheers
Nem

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i love the simplicty, droning and the futuristic atmosphere of it.

kind of a versatile track


i think maybe the saw at the end could be really really obnoxious and sort of drown out everything when it is in.

try more of the whistly sounds and pads that are at the very end on the entire track. I really like them

i agree with the previous comments (the simplicity works, and there is definitely a drive), but i also think this could benefit from a bit more large-scale tension/release ...just a thought. i really like the texture of the mix too.

Bump

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