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I have to say I am not a fan of the clicky kick in this production. (you must be a psy guy?)
When all the percussion comes in it is a lot better, but the beginning needs work IMO. I think it lacks a strong bassline, or maybe it's just that the kick far overpowers everything.
There is a lot to work with with a triplet feel
The synths around 2:15 are great.
Maybe try playing more with the vocals so that they fade in and out of the mix more?
In general things seem a little too clear cut in the track, like I can easily tell what every single channel is. I think it's more interesting when different parts start to complement eachother and create a perceived complexity. It gets good when multiple parts begin to work together to create an intelligble musical idea.
The major thing I would do is try to break up that Kick Kick Kick Kick and the snare, because it sounds almost like a march. I would try a lighter touch, especially since this is Enya here.
Take all my comments with a grain of salt because I am sure I have very different taste than you. This is just an outside opinion.
Best,
Adam
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