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I still have, and play your G&D - Eleven rework - so I thought I'd give this a listen.
I think the intro is a little drawn out as you have commented.
(1:56) the lead which is HPF'ed in, pushes the roof of your mix which I like.
Bassline is cool, as is your bass guitar line. I think if it were double tracked it could be the focal point of the track.
(5:34) a lead comes back in (same one from 4:07) and I must say I like it. There's just something about its fragility.
I'd say your outro probably comes in a little too suddenly, maybe could do a bit of arrangement?
Double splashy snare hit sounds cool.
This tune would be even better with a vocal over the top, something a bit ethereal to match that lead.
Looking forward to these other samples.. 
Good stuff!
-K
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