Hey guys,
perhaps someone is interested in listening to my current work. It's a kind of an interlude that I made within a few hours.
Feel free to leave some lines

Greetings

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Not bad.

I dunno why, but the piano melody doesn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the track, like they are disjointed from each other

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Originally posted by chinamon not true. i say "ugh" but i am a tranny.

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Originally posted by kotsy lol colour me retarded

yes.. I was groovin tell the piano came in and it made me shrug. Not that the idea of the piano on the piece is bad. I think the 4th 5th and 6th notes seem odd. plus its sounds too loud and too cheesy. try and find a more real piano sound on your vst. Like a nice grand piano with a epic pad over the top and just play around with the melody until you find one that sends shivers down your spine. If you have a doubt that it sounds weird then change it tell its perfect. its the staple of your track so it needs to be solid.

thanks for your comments! Seems that there's still something to improve

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Near Encounter - In Moments With And Without You (Full 320kbit)
Near Encounter @ MySpace