JBJ - "Veto" [permanent link] [raceriv.com; 19 MB] -- 8:26, 125 bpm, C Minor

Turn it up good and loud, and listen. Then tell me what you think.

This is the first complete song I've done in a long time, and the first one I've posted on TA, as far as I can remember. Comments and suggestions on all aspects of production are welcome.

Last edited by MrJiveBoJingles on Jun-02-2009 at 19:21

I like the atmosphere. Its a little bit thin, but keep the good work up

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Originally posted by Dreamtea I like the atmosphere. Its a little bit thin, but keep the good work up

Thanks.

You're right that I need to work on making my productions "fuller."

Could you pl. upload as sendspace or other?
Thanks.

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Here you go:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/dntgze

Contrary to what others have said I beg to differ.
Less is always more and your track does sound quite full, there's enough going on and any additions on top might spoil the flow of the track, which is what it has going for it right now.

I guess you could throw in some extra pads or so, but not really necessary.

The only thing is the levels are far too low, bring them up a bit!
Mixdown seems fine though, although the kick could be raised a notch i guess.

Good job!

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Originally posted by varun Contrary to what others have said I beg to differ. Less is always more and your track does sound quite full, there's enough going on and any additions on top might spoil the flow of the track, which is what it has going for it right now. I guess you could throw in some extra pads or so, but not really necessary. The only thing is the levels are far too low, bring them up a bit! Mixdown seems fine though, although the kick could be raised a notch i guess. Good job!

Thanks!

I have some clashing frequencies right now and they're preventing me from getting my levels any higher. I need to find out which elements are interfering with each other and apply the proper EQ to them. Going to work on that in the next few days.

I did some EQing and was able to lift up the volume on the whole track, plus I played with the levels on the percussion and made the highs a little louder relative to the rest of the track. Sounds a bit clearer to me. Here's the new SendSpace link:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2u16vq

Not bad, everything sounds much more clearer. Good work with the percs

Thanks.

sounds good mate, yoou might want to change the level of that snare... or maybe change the sound all together, it doesn't fit with the rest of the sounds its too harsssh


keep on groovin!

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Originally posted by Spliph sounds good mate, yoou might want to change the level of that snare... or maybe change the sound all together, it doesn't fit with the rest of the sounds its too harsssh keep on groovin!

Thanks. I actually thought about changing the snare or its level, but wasn't sure. I'll experiment with it.